My haiku for RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge–a fun activity and contest that is open for everyone to participate, and helps keep our creative writer’s mind active! This week’s words are: Think & Fresh. I have 2 haikus this week! I hope you enjoy them.
“Waking Up”
She steps out to think
Breathing in the fresh morning,
Lacey wings unfurl.
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“Which One?”
Freshly baked bread is
The most delicious, I think,
A chocolate world.
In the first haiku I imagine a fairy or some little creature with wings waking up to the dawn’s light, her mind still heavy with sleep (same as some of us humans 😉 ), so she goes outside and breathes in the morning air to wake herself up and get her mind thinking clearly.
In the second haiku I ponder which of my favorite foods I like better: fresh bread, soft on the inside and crunchy delicious on the outside, or chocolate (a world made of chocolate is a delicious dream only Willy Wonka could make come true!). Both are such wonderful things, I can’t decide between the two. 🙂 Can you? What are your favorite foods?
© 2015 E. Rawls Newsletter
How to read a haiku:
She steps out to think, Breathing in the fresh morning.
Breathing in the fresh morning, Lacey wings unfurl.
I love them both. They are sweet and whimsical.
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Thank you, Patty! ❤
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You’re welcome.
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Lovely. I love them both equally for different reasons. The first is so delicate, and brings some wonderful imagery to mind. The second, well, a chocolate world? I’m there with bells on. 🙂
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Thank you so much! A chocolate world is a dream of mine I wish would come true. 🙂
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Hot bread! with butter.
I must have a variety of food.
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Creamy butter is a must for bread, definitely!
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A chocolate world. Yes, let’s go there, please. 🙂 And I agree with Phoenix, the first one is delicate and matches the lighthearted, ethereal personality we’ve come to know from fairies. Nice job this week!
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I’m so glad you like them as much as I do. ^_^ Thanks! I’m trying to catch up on things on the blog, and I’ll be writing a monthly update some time this week before I send the newsletter out. 🙂
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