Haiku for RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge–a fun activity and contest that is open for everyone to participate, and helps keep our creative writer’s mind active! This week’s words are: Rein & Quest.
“Quest”
Energy reined in
She prepares for the grim quest,
Skull Island ahead.
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“That Treat You Want”
Such a cruel quest
He bought lettuce, not ice cream
Desire reined in.
© 2016 E. E. Rawls and Rawls E. Fantasy
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How to read a haiku as 2 separate sentences:
Energy reined in, She prepares for the grim quest,
She prepares for the grim quest, Skull Island ahead.
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Nice. Two types of disappointment. Well done. ❤
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You make me smile, Tess. 🙂 ❤
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Beautiful writing, as usual! You write such great haikus! 🙂
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Thank you, Madeline! I wish haikus were more popular, they are fun to write. 🙂 Have you tried writing some?
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I’ve done a couple, yes. 🙂 I like finding a picture like on Pinterest or somewhere and then drawing inspiration from that. 🙂
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Pinterest is an amazing source of inspiration! I wasn’t too familiar with it until this year, but it’s lots of fun. 🙂
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I just recently got into it too! It’s kind of addicting… 😛
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Skull island… that sounds scary! The mood in the first one was captured really well. The last line was shiver-worthy. And the second made me smile. Ice cream is much better than lettuce, though it does have its place.
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Thank you! For some reason I do better writing scary things. I don’t know why. 🙂
I was craving ice cream but only had lettuce, so I had to make the haiku suffer for me, lol. 😀
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Love these, E! 🙂 The second one made me laugh
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Thanks, Rachael! I had a craving for ice cream but didn’t have any, so I had to write out my frustration. 😛
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Good idea.
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I know that second one all too well. I’ve been craving ice cream like crazy since it first got warm last week. So, that battle to balance healthy with not-so-healthy, and then caving in to desire… Yup. XD
The first haiku is well done, too. I read it the way you recommended, and the “second half” hammers in the gloominess and dread that’s sparked in the “first half.” Very nice!
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Yup. I want my ice cream. Even though I’m lactose intolerant, I will suffer for the delicious taste of it now and then.
Thanks! Haiku are meant to be read in two parts, but I do try to blend them so it can work as a whole and separate, both. I’m glad I succeeded. 😀
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Both haiku are great. I immediately thought of the movie King Kong. 😉
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