My haikus for RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Challenge–a fun activity and contest that is open for everyone to participate, and helps keep our creative writer’s mind active! This week’s words are: Start & Hot. I hope you enjoy.
“Race Track”
At the starting point
I race the track that is life,
Through hot, weary days.
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“To Win”
Hot is the pressure
The Elf Lord furrows his brow,
The game of chess starts!
© 2015 Rawls E. Fantasy Newsletter
How to read a haiku:
At the starting point, I race the track that is life,
I race the track that is life, Through hot, weary days.
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Love the first one…good job done with words and idea both!
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Thank you, Shailzaa! The words were more difficult this week.
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The first sums up precisely how I feel sometimes. And the second I’m guessing is connected to your book? Both are good. 🙂
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I’m glad you like these. The race is how I feel. The 2nd was for fun and unexpected. The word “hot” made me think of stress and pressure, like playing a game. 🙂
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Both good particularly like the second one. 🙂
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Thank you, Marje. The 2nd was fun to write. 🙂
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Loving haiku about elves here 🙂
They’re both good, and a creative use of the words (as usual)! Irrelevant fact: I stink at chess because I have the attention span of a gnat . . .
Nice ones this week!
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Thanks so much, Rebekah! I couldn’t resist adding elves this round. 😉
I don’t know, when a gnat finds me its attention stays on me for a long time. 😉 j/k, I wonder how that phrase came to be, anyway? 😀
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