Last week was my first time sharing the blurb I’d drafted up, and I also shared my title idea. I’ve since been revising both of these, and I’m thinking I had an easier time actually writing the book than I am with the blurb and title making process, haha! 🙂
I want to shout out a big THANK YOU to this wonderful writing community and all of you wonderful people and friends who pitched in to help me, giving me fantastic advice and suggestions for the title and blurb, and for retweeting. I cannot express how much it means to me. ❤ Thank you!
Here is the new title I’m considering for Book 1 of V. Chronicles. Please vote what you think and I’d love to hear from you in the comments:
And now, the revised blurb:
Living with the enemy. That’s what happens to Cyrus Sole when her elven people cast her out for being a half-blood with Elemental powers. She finds herself in the enemy’s capital, seeking help to master her power over metal. For there is only one place that can teach her: the enemy’s elite school of the D.G. League. But there are obstacles:
- It is a school for “boys.”
- They hate elves. An elf cannot enter the school, nor even the city, unless they are a slave.
She must create a new identity for herself, and pray she can hide behind it until her training is complete. And hope she can survive her new classmates…
The world fell to ruin long ago, at the hands of the Vampiric Emperor, and soon he will return to finish what he started. Cyrus learns she is more than just a half-blood, but is a reborn soul from the ancient past sent to battle for the world. And she isn’t the only one…
There you have it! Please tell me your thoughts. Would you read this book based on the blurb? Does something in the blurb need to be changed, or is it great as is?